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Conditions2: Consequences

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Dec 27, 2007 | 3:11 PM EST

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Thanks for the second frontpage Tom!

The second installment of the series "Conditions".

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A criminal took Red (Member of the Police Department using "The device") his wife as a hostage.
In exchange for his wife, he wants Red's device.

But Red can't release the device because of the conditions (His adrenaline level is too high).

Stay tuned for further episodes!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Seems a bit ambitious.

I like the way you are pointing with this; weapons system gone wrong or abused, and while not a truly original idea, it still remains a thought-provoking subject. However, the story could use a couple of detail changes, for one, the device shouldn't be a weapons system, the ability to freely move matter around, or condense it into any device imaginable, seems more the premise of a construction tool or the technology behind(if the matter condensation principle can be reverse-engineered) a teleportation device. People seem generally more willing to accept a new breakthrough in technology if said breakthrough is something to aide humanity, not to create another killing device. Also, such a device that has such capabilities will probably leave very few situations that they couldn't get out of, and it would take someone with a staggering lack of imagination to see surrendering device as the only option. Maybe take the time to elaborate on how the device could possibly work, is it a hydrogen-powered magnetic field, a controlled-density gravity field? Animation and voice acting could also do some work, but are good nonetheless, it is the writing and story outline that could use more makeup.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


It case been nearly 3 years since I did the Metroid Collab witjavascript:submission_controller.G etReviewController().SaveReview();
Submit Review!h you, and I have to say your animations have not improved one bit.

DJJ-asshole responds:

Well, your attitude hasn't changed a bit either.

These 2 episodes are, like I said, static.
Nothing exciting happens here, however, the next one is action packed.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Why did the good guys not just use their special device thing to kill the evil guy instantly? Besides that it was still good


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Abrupt/Distorted ending

After the shot I was expecting a "Drop him!" and all the men to shoot him.. yet the evil guy just escapes?!

DJJ-asshole responds:

Actually the purple haired guy is dead as Avril Lavigne's hype, but you can call it an animator's lazyness...


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


the quality can be improved and the story could be more concise, but in all, quite entertaining
keep up the good work!

DJJ-asshole responds:

Well thanks for the review, but I always tend to improve no matter what.