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Thanks for the second frontpage Tom!

The second installment of the series "Conditions".

PLEASE WATCH EPISODE 1 BEFORE WATCHING THIS.
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A criminal took Red (Member of the Police Department using "The device") his wife as a hostage.
In exchange for his wife, he wants Red's device.

But Red can't release the device because of the conditions (His adrenaline level is too high).

Stay tuned for further episodes!

Reviews


gradenatorgradenator

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2008

I don't mean to sound like an idiot, but...

couldn't Red have just turned that bad dude's head into a watermelon or something? With a melon for a head, one would find it difficult to pull a gun trigger.

The thing I like most about this series so far is the title. "Conditions" (adrenaline/being alive/etc...) it's a great idea. I like the story, you just need to improvise more on the technicalities (did I phrase that right?).

Just make an excuse like, "I couldn't do it... I have a deadly fear of watermelons! If only I could've overcome that fear... If only I could've saved my wife!" -- you're free to use that by the way. It would be nice to mention me in the comment if you do. LOL

ALSO- ur animation is fine the way it is. don't go changin' 5/5



termalisktermalisk

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 1, 2008

Seems a bit ambitious.

I like the way you are pointing with this; weapons system gone wrong or abused, and while not a truly original idea, it still remains a thought-provoking subject. However, the story could use a couple of detail changes, for one, the device shouldn't be a weapons system, the ability to freely move matter around, or condense it into any device imaginable, seems more the premise of a construction tool or the technology behind(if the matter condensation principle can be reverse-engineered) a teleportation device. People seem generally more willing to accept a new breakthrough in technology if said breakthrough is something to aide humanity, not to create another killing device. Also, such a device that has such capabilities will probably leave very few situations that they couldn't get out of, and it would take someone with a staggering lack of imagination to see surrendering device as the only option. Maybe take the time to elaborate on how the device could possibly work, is it a hydrogen-powered magnetic field, a controlled-density gravity field? Animation and voice acting could also do some work, but are good nonetheless, it is the writing and story outline that could use more makeup.



24k24k

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 31, 2007

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It case been nearly 3 years since I did the Metroid Collab witjavascript:submission_controller.G etReviewController().SaveReview();
Submit Review!h you, and I have to say your animations have not improved one bit.


DJJ-asshole responds:

Well, your attitude hasn't changed a bit either.

These 2 episodes are, like I said, static.
Nothing exciting happens here, however, the next one is action packed.


beananbeanan

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 31, 2007

why?

Why did the good guys not just use their special device thing to kill the evil guy instantly? Besides that it was still good



Acid-AnimationsAcid-Animations

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 31, 2007

Abrupt/Distorted ending

After the shot I was expecting a "Drop him!" and all the men to shoot him.. yet the evil guy just escapes?!


DJJ-asshole responds:

Actually the purple haired guy is dead as Avril Lavigne's hype, but you can call it an animator's lazyness...