lots better than wat i can do :) try making the fps higher to make the animation smoother

if it had a story line or a context it would be beter but this is a good traing i think....

the animation is nice...

but you should only submit things that you expect to pass.

if you did that all fbf, than good job.

Of course, like the name suggested, its was random, and it contained booms. If it had actually a plot and theme and story, its would be very good. Theres alot of potential in your animation.

Dont be surprised if this doesnt get through because it is only elements of a movie and nothing really solid. you need to make something with meaning