Score: 7
"Yes, stick figure flashes can still be cool."
date: September 27, 2009
As this particular flash proves. I was amused at all of them, even the obvious ones, the little screams really added to this flash. As a short, this flash delivers, but could use a bit more for improvement.
As was mentioned before, background music would have added to the comedy, and a bit of detail, even with stick figures would enhance the experience. Taken all together, it added a couple chuckles, but each individual skit was to short, but giving anticipation for the joke but instead delivering it almost instantly.
I know it seems like a lot of points, but each just needs some fine tweaking rather then an overhaul. A good flash, more so for a first one, and I gotta admit, I loved the catapult :D.
September 27, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks! I did make this a while ago, so some of those points have improved. I was still a n00b when I made this so I didn't know how to add background music, and I didn't have enough experience to put more detail into it.
