Pretty bad.

No Offense, but you need some serious flash practice. i wish i could get back the time i spent watching it. You need to work on ur A-scripting and the images were low quality. Also, a background would be nice and without the repetitive music.

peace

Not good at all

This wasn't good at all.

- This shorts were only about 3 seconds, this is too short in my opinion, even for a short.

- The strange "people" you drew looked horrible, like 30 seconds work with microsoft paint.

- There wasn't neither anything funny, nor anything making sense in it. Every scene shows the death of your strange dude.

- Music was horrible, caused a headache.

Please make it a lot better next time, and i mean A LOT.

A bit more work.

Well. To be blunt the flash was quite well...better than most things that are the judgement stage but this flash needs a bit more actionscripting help. you see when you press the "M" button(Should be marked Menu" takes you back the newgrounds loader screen which is a big problem indeed.

Annoying

It Frustrated me how you had to go back to the preloader everytime one of the 2 clips ended.

IT WAS OK

it was ok but if you want to get a better score,
you should change your super shorts, to shorts.
(make them longer)
other than that good job