1 - dull from lack of sound

2 - too short

3 - badly animated

although dont worry, with a bit more experience, animating skill and of course sounds, youll make better movies, i can help you with the sound bit if you like, i got a microphone for recording sounds you need.

over time youll discover ways of animating better.
even watching a movie can help.
also check there arnt any screens where it flashes, like in the movie.

hope i also help!

if you think you find sprites easy you are sadly mistaken that wos terible music didnt fit the vid and it wos soooooo short u must have had it on leik 5fps worst ever u seriously need to improve before submitting

it was your first, dude dont submit that stuff it will just fail get a little better and then submit, make em longer try harder all that stuff can be said about that submission, but keep working on it