Score: 10

"deserves more views"

by: Draxiss

date: July 19, 2008

this has improved since i saw the first episode awhile back, keep it up man

Score: 8

"Very Nice"

by: dante89

date: January 8, 2008

I love the story and action scenes. Good pacing. If only the graphics and animations were better it would kick all sorts of ass. I look forward to your future works so I've already added you to my favorite artists list. Keep up the good work.

My only gripe towards graphics is that the characters looked pretty disfigured and my gripe towards animation was that it didn't seem very natural. meh its just my opinion.

Score: 8

"thumbs up(;"

by: Crosseout

date: December 26, 2007

hey
First off I want to say that you have improved a lot.
The storyline is pretty good, its mostly linear and its easy to follow it through, which is a good thing. I like how you change between camera positions and movements, it adds a cinematic feel to it all. When it comes to the graphics there is a lot of variation, I wish you kept the clean style throughout the movie (except in the flashbacks) because you tend to have some scenes where the graphics are a bit too simplified. You use a lot of gradients which doesn't always fit but usually its nice. Your characters are good but i'd like to see a little better graphics on small details like for example the watch.

your fight scenes are mostly good, they are well coordinated and have nice backgrounds. The problem with the fight scenes are that the animation here does not run as smoothly as in the other part of the movie, its kind of jagged and sometimes the characters become disfigured.
Your voice acting is excellent, but I would invest in a proper microphone because the quality is poor.

anyways it was a nice movie, i'd say 7.6/10 which is good, no doubt about that(;

Score: 8

"Another 8"

by: lucrent

date: November 28, 2007

Hey [ Nick ]

Again I do like the style you're using in your video(s). Though I know you want to know what to improve so I'll add in my input..

For the scene where he is in the lobby or restuarant and he's dialing in a number to his ear peice -- in the future you may want to show the "camera" on the ear peice as he's dialing (doesn't need to be for the full time he's dialing), just enough to show what he's doing. When I first saw that I thought he was picking his ear and I had no idea where the dialing was from.

Another thing is that I do like how the action fights are getting more involved though there is still some of seeing the same thing, a little redundant. In the past, for ideas I would watch some of the Xiao Xiao collection (you can search for it here on the Newgrounds website).

A scene I had issues with was the final scene before the credits, after killing the blue haired guy (sorry, I'm not the kind of person to look into story line details). When he lifts his hand up to answer his headpeice, I could tell you wanted to add a sort of drama, a re-accurence of his past memories, though it was a drag watching him lift that fat weapon of his. What I would do for that scene -- after killing the guy, he drops his weapons, or just one of them. Then he answers his headpiece. Though like others have been saying about porportion, when you have the guys lifting their arms, to me it just looks kinda funny. Maybe try using a different "camera" angle.

Maybe something to try is for some scenes, like the one where he is side by side with blue haired man (yay new name for him already!) and they're both shooting off at each other -- for some amount of the time you may want to try an eagle eye view "camera"

Well I'm pretty tired right now so it's a bit hard for me to post a well rounded comment, sorry for that. Keep up the long work, it only gets more intense -- but well worth it at the end.

>_^

[ Jared ]

Score: 10

"Outstanding! exactly what I expected!"

by: shadowknightx

date: November 23, 2007

Your second flash and you've improved a lot. The animation was great and the sound went well. I think this deserves more than a 3.56. I like the storyline and the characters were well done. The animation was a little choppy in places and at some points the charcters were a little out of proportion. anyways congratulations! 5/5