Not bad.
I like the last second twist ending with the girl's death. Good work.
Author Comments
This is the short story of the little girl and the bad bell.
wasserbrunner responds:
thanks for the review!
Funny.
Dude, this was actually funny. I haven't actually laughed at recent submission in a while. Good job.
wasserbrunner responds:
thanks a lot! at least a couple people enjoyed it
Cool!
The graphics and animation were pretty good, but you REALLY should've found a girl voice actor or at least modify your voice. It was pretty funny, especially the ending.
wasserbrunner responds:
lol well thanks
i did modify my voice a little bit
guess not enough :P
thanks for the review
Roflz
Absolutely adorable. Definitely front page material. Despite being a totally predictable story.
wasserbrunner responds:
haha thanks!
im definitely not getting front page with a crappy 2.9 rating though... :(
Rofl
Hahaha, the ending was hilarious. Great job!
wasserbrunner responds:
lol thanks! im glad at least some people liked it... :P
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