The attention to detail that this lacks is what really kills it. I think you have down the basics of sprite animation, but there are lots of instances of bad cropping of the sprites, background colors not matching and other things that would be easy to fix and would greatly increase the look and impact of the movie.

It could have used some background and something better than a plain green floor. You are already using sprites, so that aspect of it is another easy fix.

Are you new?

This is good not bad not great good a mix off great and bad i like it if it is your first animation its not going to be great there are lots of other improvements this video can use and lots of other ways to make this the best its really hard making animation and i know i tried once but i didn't finish it so i think you should improve it but its good make sure to not let anyone copy it that's what happen to a person i know anyways don't give up... and don't give in!

I hope this advice helps 10 stars Be proud of yourself good work!

good

it was good but not great but this is probably not your best but animation is hard so
nice. PS Kirby rules! <( '.' )>

Sadly, I'll have to kill myself...

U didn't even cut the shapes of the sprites MAN! ;[

hey hey hey

What was the song in this? it was really good.