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The wtf story

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That one hell of a story ......not really but it sounded nice

please dont blam guys i cant use it to anything
So DONT well i dont care if you do but dont......?

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This wasn't very good, to be honest. I get that random humor can be funny sometimes, but there has to be a cogent storyline to back it up as well. This was just a bunch of random words typed into Speakonia and some pretty terrible animations to go along with it. Not much effort!

*sigh*

i will be nice.....randomness...was ok...its more effective when you make it at least funny and random....my other review pretty much covered a lot of stuff...make it a bit longer...put more detail into it...make a semi- story line at least and you will do good...your skill level in animation good do wonders for newgrounds if you would submit something worth watching....it is much more rewarding to make some really cool flash that gets on the front page ( which you could do if you tried) than make a billion random stupid flashes that people hate but are nice enough to rate easy....along with all the friends you have giving it 5's to pass it through the portal

healyman responds:

you talk too much

seriously

i dont think your cartoon is very good. it is just soo bad, its that bad.

healyman responds:

I love you too

...........lawl.

i loved it :O
nah not really but i did like it :3 very gooooood on randomness~
4/5

Ok then......

Hahaha that was so random. It entertained me so alright. The mouths could maybe have been a little more syncronized though. Other than that I dunno what to say to make it better lol.

healyman responds:

thx man but the none syncronized thing its part of the LOL part

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Nov 2, 2007
1:49 PM EDT