try harder

there is a lot of stuf you can improve but stil its not so bad

Alot you can improve

Hmm... I don't know where to start exactly.
I didn't feel any kind of good context, try picking a story or something like...
- Introduction - Normal day - Problem Emerges - Attempt to solve - Solved

Audio handling and picking out a track that works with your animation and if the animation gets longer than the sound track, it would be fitting to choose a track that both works with the animation and is loop friendly.

Remember, sometimes quality doesn't have to mean popularity. Even stick figures can make it to the frontpage if they've got a funny point or reach out to the right audience, though I suppose they'd have to be flowing also in the animation itself, not looking different from time to time or you can't see what they do. But ofcourse, as an artist you'd want to constantly improve your graphics materials, getting more advanced, though it takes time and practice.

Adding voices is usually a good way to create a good atmosphere, if you have voice actors or you're voice acting yourself while having fun pitching it and such.

I hope this review was useful to you ^_^

erm...

its odd...
gave me a chuckle here and there, but its just too damn random.
props on your first animation tho.

Weelllll....

Its random, and somewhat funny, so ill give you a four... Good start for your irst animation though

OMFG!!

Dude that song was great!
And the story....it was toching... ;(

5/5+10/10