Score: 9
"edutainment"
date: June 20, 2008
Great work on this, it is definitely a heavy story. i also liked the animation style of your 3d and layered segments (the TV's ambient lighting, the character turning in the storm). it seemed to drag, though, and there weren't enough emotional cues to connect with the character. you can play up the drama in the words and little facial expressions to create the idea of this random person who feels completely safe with what they know and is disdainful of new, life-saving info.
and, a segment outing how TF staying in your heart is a bad thing. (if the audience has watched the rest of the film, they're most probably supportive of the cause and will appreciate seeing the gross side of the love story).
and and, now go start preaching the gospel of common sense! you would fit in at thetruth.com, or at least get something out of their style
