"The victim" they have a fucking gun- they aren't a victim lmao
All jokes aside it's good just a bit much and its really stretched
Author Comments
It took me a month to make this...
This flash follows a victim of madness, as he tries futilely to kill the madness hero.
Enjoy.
Sry about file size... I compressed as much as I could.
Submit to Madness 2007 plz!
weird but good
lol
it was good
and the SHOOP DA WHOOP at the end was really funny
didn't see it coming
XD
i liked it
but it could be better, i spotted that nearer towards the end, the agents had pistols with a suppressor, yet when they fired them, it gave of the rapport of a none suppressed shot.
bomberbob12 responds:
i dont kno too much about weapons :3
... uh...
>= Warning! Long and extensive review! <=
Was this actually 12 fps? Try at least 18... hopefully 20
First I'd like to say, there are definently some graphics that could have been fixed quite easily. For instance, if you're going to use lines for bullets, they should not be short lines moving forward, they should be long lines that extend from the gun's barrel to the point where they hit. Then the next frame should be a dashed line, and then they're gone.
I suggest making it faster paced with smoother animation. Also the "fast moving effect" with the paint brush scribbles was not only that fast, but didn't really look that good. The first time I saw it I thought he was being engulfed in something, but then I figured it out...
You also kinda need work with the music/sound better. Like when the slow music starts, you should have first given a pause in music with just slow mo sound effects or something, then kinda fade in the music.
