Use proper grammer, it shows professionalism

Yeah well, it was good for a first try, it should of been on the videos page instead of here. But, i mean, it looked like it took 2 minutes. You should at least add a background, try to make the gun sprite look like it was part of the scene, not bright red while everything else was dull and grey. Good luck with it, though. It's a start!

awesome

it was awesome even thouthg it was 2 seconds but i love that make more

can you please send me that preloader

it was nice but i really liked the preloader

Ummm...

That was like....nothing...

your first flash submission...

...will never see the light of day, sorry to be so harsh, but its true