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A dark story about a man, who fell in love in a night club singer.
After some time she disappears, without leaving any sing.
And on a next morning he founds a strange note.
This is the second movie in Noir-York Trilogy.
I hope this work gets in Noir Toon collection.
I like this
Now I like this one for a number of reasons but mostly because you have added good design and ofcourse the element of suprise which really made for a fun experience and overall a good start here. This was really good I love the dark feel here very "NOIR" you really outdid yourself with this one, the "VOICE" could use some more effort though, but other then that this was great, I will ad this one to my faves list. And I was pretty happy with the outcome, so nice job and nice efforts. You have some good effort and skill just use it to your full potential, and make us some master pieces.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this is where I may suggest some small tips and possibly some suggestions, I hope you will take a small look into some of the suggestions. but honestly I only have one suggestion and that is with the voices they need a bit more effort and quality to them more passion.
if you had more ability with the graphic and maybe asking for someone to do the speeches it would be perfect
you're a nice story teller.
wow that was awesome
you use moonlight sonata i knew i have listen to one of those songs before but i truly do not belive or think it will be that one really good movie and the end was amazing and the music was perfect i love it is truly perfect
May have been a bit too long, but the old animation use made me feel nostalgia and the story, while not the most original, certianly had a lot of compelling elements, and there was nice character development as well.
This movie is great!
Man, you have a style!
The story is cool, romantic and tragic!
Nice, i hope to see third cartoon soon lol
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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