Not bad; not amazing like most of your work, but then it WAS a 'quickie'.
The only real shortcoming is that it's an in-joke that will apparently will only appeal to forum'ers (of which I'm not since I'm over-fora-extended already). Nice song tho. ^_^
Oh, and despite the applicability of Queen's "Don't Stop Me Now" to the drama this alludes to (see above), can anyone else hear this ol' classic nowadays and NOT think of that scene in "Shaun of the Dead"? :P