by far the best of the series
this is a classic that only ripens with age.
I keep and display it on my favorites shelf with pride
Author Comments
Hello there.
Well, I had a lot of spare time, but I think after this, I will make episode 4 later in the months. Since it's the ending of summer. I should probably get back to the studying and all.
As I said, this is episode 3. If you haven't watched the 2 other episodes then please go ahead.
Also another note: I repeat, this has sticks, if you don't like them, don't bother to watch it/review it.
*Please, for the love of goodness, give a review longer than a sentence and help me point up some flaws in my flash, tell me how to improve and what not and also, a review full of swears and nothing useful will be abusive and probably deleted*
Additions:
-Oh wow, 2 songs were in here.
-Longer kb's
-I made it 10-20 seconds longer!
-Text added
Facts
-Revolves around spare time.
That is all.
Enjoy.
Getting better
The slideshow has now become more detailed, which is encouraging. I think it needs more points of work, but we're getting there, slowly.
I think that the next major thig you need to make is a Black "Subtitle Bar" at the base of the picture, as the writing jumps around the screen. Granted, you've typed it this time, but it's still a niggle.
The drawing of the stickmen themselves needs to be ramped up a little - more detail, not quite such a bulky cursor used to draw the figures and I think we're amkign progress. Other sounds and maybe more of a plot would be useful as well...
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interesting
Very good for such a simple flash. And the music was well picked. However there is still a lot of graphics you could work on.
nice
that's nice, it obviouslt doesn't have any plot at all, but that's okay as long as the series rock... these characters are still so damn cute ^___________________^ gray background is good, but the graphics are still at a point where you wonder what can NOT be improved- stick don't usually look good. But I can't do flash myself so I don't have the authority or knowledge to suggest
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^^Good Points^^
You changed the background, which is good. The storyline was interesting and random, as usual. I love their ability to state the obvious or point out completely random things.
^^Needs Improving^^
No idea what the hell happened at the end. Also, I thought the drawn text gave this a little bit more personality. I liked it better before you changed it.