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The source of Ida's misfortune (and that of those around her) is revealed at last.
Part 2 of 2.
Like they way you made this one, like reading a book! You managed to keep my attention..which is pretty hard to do. Great Job!
This was simply beautiful, great job, i enjoyed it fully.
lol very nice
This seems like a book, with deepness only a book can show...good work, but animation's kinda choppy :\
just make a freakin movie out of this stuff you really could. people only say it boring cuase its flash i guees
well, it felt kind of...boring to me, i mean, its not anything bad really, its just... well, lets just say u could have done better, it just sounds liek a bed story, but like for 4 years-old, well, u didnt give it much thought to the plot, i mean, the way that develops, its just a chain of simple ideas tied up together, its just for listeners, it doesnt make ur mind wonder u know? it doesnt make u wana watch it all, it doesnt make u wana Feel it, of course, i dont mean to ofend u, if i did, i am sorry, but after all, this is what reviews are all about, lol, well, its just that, graphics arnt that good either, but u can easly tolerate that, if the plot of the story is good, sometimes it kind of hides the other mistakes... i mean, it does have somethings, like, "why would the kid protect the ones that tried to kill her? i mean, its a Kid, they are usually easy to get mad" or simple questions like that, but as the plot goes on, it doesnt really... make u wonder, it doesnt surprice u, its like if u knew what was gona happen before it happens, well, kind of, since u know, its ur story, but as for everything else, u just start the first detail, and then, the story develops by it self in seconds, i think i have seen something like this somewhere, but please, if u could, u can always put a lil more mind to it, u know? like... "surprice me", dont get me wrong tho, its still good, it just... "needs improving", same with the sound >_> , well, at least u tried, lol, thats what matters here >_<
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