Interesting
The animation was crude but this could defintely be something good with some work. If you have difficulty drawing, just get with someone who's good at it. That's what I'd do.
Author Comments
EDIT 7-20-07 6PM: Thanks for the reviews guys and gals. I know it needs work, but I feel motivated again! Time to get back to work on this! Thanks everyone!
Total crap though it may be... something in me decided that, after 3 years of just sitting on my hard drive and watching the original on NG again, this needed to be posted. I need motovation to finish this, and I have nothing. Damn World of Warcraft being so addicting and work taking up all my time! Just be gentle in reviewing. PLEASE LEAVE REVIEWS. I don't care if you flame me, just leave a note, a critique, a shout-out, ANYTHING. Thanks in advance.
BMFMagnus responds:
I'm decent with drawing, at least when I have the time... Hehe... I'll get this redone to a proper 'toon, now that I have the drive.
Thanks for the review!
Hope this helps
The title says this is a rough draft, but it seems more like a storyboard to get a concept of what is going to happen in the real one you make. It was put together nicely, and the explanation was good. My only suggestion is to add more to the story after the shaman leaves, maybe some other animals he meets along the way back to his family, or another situation where his new form makes him better. Looking forward to the origional, keep it up. Unfolding into a great story so far.
BMFMagnus responds:
Thanks for the critique!
I do have a storyline written down, but I never thought about animating it until you said something... Hmm... Maybe I'll expand on this, maybe I won't. We'll see. Time will tell. Thanks again. The community has my creativity goin' again for finishing this proper. Thanks a bunch!
Too much on the intro
You spent way too much effort on the intro. A flash movie doesn't need a fancy intro, it just needs a preloader (which can be as simple as a button that you can only press when it's done loading). You should put much more effort into the actual flash.
BMFMagnus responds:
True, the intro was over-done, but I only copy/pasted it from a prior Flash I was working on. Yes, I'm that lazy. My bad? Hehe... Seriously though, yes, this movie does need some serious work. Thanks for the critique.
Ok I guess.
The drawing was not the best, but you put in an honest effort, so you get a five from me.
BMFMagnus responds:
True, the drawing wasn't up-to-par, but I have the motivation now. I will get this revised to its proper condition after reading these reviews.
Thanks for the Fiven and the review!
hahahahaahaha
that was utter crap seroily was that done by a 3 yr old
BMFMagnus responds:
And you, no offense, are an immature bigot. If you would've read the title of the movie and the author's comments you would have known what to expect before viewing this. Please read them before leaving a nasty review like this one. Just some friendly advice for next time.
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