This is..

well...how can I say this..horrible. It's blaringly obvious English isn't the creator's first language, and not only that, but the sprites were bland, the movement and text scrolled slower than my grandfather walks without his wheelchair, and he's a paraplegic. And having the text the same color as the background? NOT a good idea. I'll give you a point for the epic Newgrounds intro and the music, which, although repetitive, was quite nice.

where is ness?

i saw him in the image....where is he?

The only thing I liked..

Was the awsome Newgrounds intro! But the actual movie sucked. Sorry, but it´s true.

So many things wrong with this...

First off, the text moves WAY to slow, I found myself nearly falling asleep... Second, There were way to many grammar and spelling errors for you to not notice. Third, with they light grey backrounds, the text became near impossible to read. What were you thinking?

Good job.

I love the newgrounds intro, good shit.