Score: 8
"Syndacite... theres a Syndacite that rule Sydney?"
date: November 7, 2007
man... what an accurate drawing of Sydney...
it was in that condition when i visited that last year *teehee*
excellent animation and frame by frame (i animate a similar way, it's a total bitch innit?)
everything about it was canny good, loved the lines
"if it was her you'd be dead"
"i swear it was *URRK GAHHHH FUCK*" (e.g. im dead)
"thats more like it"
but some areas were like... well for one a bit bad in relms of script writing
"you cant beat me i was your old fighting trainer"
i actually shouted "Hello?! plot hole!" at my laptop (cue bemused look from my girlfriend)
looking forward to the next one however
apparently your best...
so we shall see!
November 28, 2007
Author's Response:
Lolz. Loved your review. and yea the lines where the guy swears. I'll be taking out in the DVD eddition. But im glad you enjoyed it...and the next chapter is on its way. and FAST