Lots going on here

And here we have a cleverly imagined entry, and im sure there will be lots of Criticisms but aside from all that I have to say That I Absolutely Like the idea of this and as I review this its just the start of things. but now lets really get into this. The voices need lots of work on this one and I would say the "MIC" could be of a better choice as there was some static there, other then that story and animation was not bad. And now the end is near in my review, while i had a fun time reviewing this I still had some confusion here but thats ok I Will watch it a few more times, but for the mostpart this was notbad interesting on some parts and could be somewhat better in others, So in my Closing Remarks Overall you have produced a good submission here, Keep up the interesting flash-works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I will start off this part with a few ideas and suggestions that could make it much better and overall bringing more viewers too seeing your content. just takes that little extra effort to bring across all fronts. Voices need more quality to them and you need a better quality mic.

~X~

Too long

Well, this is the first time I've seen one of these flashes, and I can say that it was just okay. All of the inside jokes were really funny and it was nice to hear them, but the animation was too simple, and there was little action going on, and the cutaway jokes were a bit too random. Not bad, anyway.

That adams apple.

This piece was worth the watch I must say. There were few things that I could mention that you don't already know(or already know).

Pros:
Video game references
Hawaii-en shirts
Goatees
Alchohal
Hating noobs
Hating fan boys
Ninjas
Fire
Emulating The Decline
Wonder-man?
David Spade
Tissue Paper

Cons:
Poor voice acting and or microphone performance.
Animation fluidity
Animation detail
Slowness of Gags

Good Job!

All oyu really need to do is change the pre-loader, so if it doesen't show percentage I can stream. Other than that great work ;)

wicked

Personally, I really hope this makes it through rating... eh, nvm. What am I sayin... im sure it will get through. I did notice, as you said, there were a few points where im sure the joke was an inside joke... but, still... very entertaining. And its cool that you did this specifically for your friends. ^^ i'll be looking for more.