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The finished version, Thanks
I Liked it
I wish we still had the "Humor" Violence" Ratings on here so I could explain why I gave you a 6... I'm not going to say anything about the graphics, They weren't great, but they were okay. The main thing was the plot... I mean, It was a story, and it was one with a happy ending (Which you never see here) But it wasnt one of those things that made me go "Ahahaha" Or "Oh my god Will he make it!" You know? Still, it was pretty good. Also something that would probabaly take 5 seconds and make it alot better is the music at the end needs to fade out instead of just ending, It makes it look x1000 more professional. Keep them coming!
thanks for posting the full video. Awsome job. Yeah, just work on the graphics and you'll do great. 5/5 7/10 You Win
not shabby, keep practicing, u might wanna practice on the layers though, when the teacher left he was there for a sec, u coulda had him keep going out of the view, and the legs on the bedpole and him running out the door and stuff like taht, u prolly know what I mean.
Keep it up
Nice younghood video!
This remembers the university comedies, I like them!
The graphics can be much better, drawing lines as you did with the road in the credits rather than hand pulse. A relaxed quality work looks nicer than a rushed one!
it was good
i really enjoyed now blamming something and seeing an artist actully try to make a good flash you did good you deerve your 5/5
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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