Below average/ Failing
Opening statements:
The story had little to keep me interested in it; I didn't really care about anything that happened in it and there is much to be worked on and improved from in this.
Content:
~You need a pause button.
~You would do good with a pause menu.
~You could use a scene select.
~Try an extras menu with your ideas and such in it.
Audio:
~You have no vocals in this, and this is what makes the pause button essential. Some people want to read what is being said and fully understand it. If you don't add it then you will have abnormal pauses and places were text goes by too fast.
~The music was annoying, and unnecessary.
~Sound effects need to be done over or replaced. Some need to be added.
Animation:
~Needs quite a bit of work. Work on your landscapes more especially.
~Everything moved smooth enough except for when the text interrupted the flow.
Plot:
~The introduction of the movie was poor and every transition went way too fast or was completely random.
~The ending made no sense.
~My advice to you would be to take more time to develop the story.