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Search Keywords: Heroes, Hiro, Masi Oka, Not-Hentai, Animation, Super Powers.
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Friday, April 6th, 2007, 2:08AM, Australia:
Well, it's been awhile since I had nothing better to do then make some crappy short flash cartoon at 1 in the morning, but i'm back with a new flash, and a start to a new series. Yup, based on the NBC show Heroes. This "game" follows my favourite character, Hiro. Enjoy. Oh, and there is no PreLoader.
Well notbad on this one, i like what you did with the character giving him some real character like feel, the "VOICE" well that was ok but might be better if you used a real voice, might make it feel more real like the guy was really talking, and also some "SUBTITLES" would help for extra measure, besides that it was an ok flick, keep up the decent work.
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I listned to him drone on, with that terrible lip-syncing, for quite a while, and then I clicked 'no' just for kicks...And I was taken back to the begging, no skip button either. So I just quit, I could tell how bad the flash was.
Try using some real backrounds and better drawings, then make it less boring and do some real lip-syncing, k?
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This flash was very boring. The graphics were not very good, the characters could have been drawn better and the backgrounds could have been drawn in flash instead of using pictures. The lip syncing was really off, if you put some more effort into it, it might have been better. The sound was also very bad, if you got better voices, it would be better.
Overall, not very good and could improve it by a lot. Good luck!!
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^^Good Points^^
This had a little bit of humor in it, which gave me some entertainment. Kind of cool how it is interactive as well.
^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't good at all. You didn't draw the backgrounds nor did you do much to animate in this. The lip syncing was really off, and without anything going on, I really got bored by this submission.
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I'll try and give you some positives for this, as it's what you really need. The plot seems well written, for what I can see of it. The problem arises with its length.
The graphics are not the worst I've ever seen, but you need to work on the finesse of your drawing and the lip-sync to go with the voice. Audio actors are availabe from the voice acting club on the NGBBS, so you may wish to employ them if you canot provide voices yourself.
If you're going to make a point and click choices adventure, maybe you should make it longer, as if it's only 1-2 minutes in total length, people aren't going to get drawn in and addicted, which is the key to making an award-winning game.
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