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Is a short movie but know i'm working in the second part.
I don't usually watch portal entries that aren't green or better, but I liked your title. ;) I'm glad I did watch it. I really enjoyed the style and the energy throughout the whole flash.
There are a couple things holding this back from being really excellent. The music, while a decent song choice, wasn't synced well to the action. It felt like it was just thrown there into the background. Also I would liked to have seen the whole song animated. It cut out rather suddenly. There are two other (small) things. The cut-to-black was overdone in that one part where it's zooming in on him laying on the ground. I liked it at first but it just happened too many times. And last, his eye looked funny. Eyes are extremely important; they tell a lot about your character and a close up eye shot like you did can draw the viewer in. So just always pay attention to how you draw the eyes (there are lots of tutorials online) and try not to omit them by covering with hair or whatever unless you really need to.
Keep making flash. ^^
This movie was pretty cool. The graphics were very well done. The drawings were very cartoon like and had good shading and prespective. The camera angles changed a lot, nice job there. Overall, a cool action movie.
Definitely needs some sound effects to go along with it, just the music isn't quite good enough as far as sound goes.
That was good, animation was nice, i liked the song, if you had to improve on anything I'd say work a little on the walking and running animations.
I was pretty impressed with this. The animation was fairly good, better than I expected. My only real criticism is how fast the story passed. It seemed you were excited about just getting it done when you should have gone a bit in depth with the story. I like where its headed though, and I hope there is a sequel!
Needs improvement, but good.
We need a little bit of background to know what the hell is happening. Also, it would be nice if you could tailor the music to fit the length of the flash. Don't change the music, it's a good choice, but it'd definitely be a good idea to clip it to fit.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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