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Feb 24, 2007 | 4:13 PM EST
  • Daily 4th Place February 25, 2007

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I made this animation for school. We had to make something based on some mystery, I chose the flying dutchman. I made a shipmodel and took some pictures of it I used in the animation. Making the animation took a lot more time then thought. Be sure you don't miss the extra's!

I would like to have improvement in my work so please review, I try to respond on all the reviews.

Reviews


DavidDavid

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 3, 2007

Great storyline, great graphics, great job!

This was for school??? It's amazing! Although I would prefer that backgrounds and objects be drawn by hand, you made this look great. I liked the choice of music, and you put the Disney "Lion King" song to good use at the end. Congrats. I voted you number one for the month.(It was the only one that I watched before voting on)



inokopiginokopig

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 27, 2007

well...

It was a good story, and a great concept. You obviously have talent but I would not suggest using photos like this. Some other suggestions I have are use different colors, at times I found that the colors ran together and or fought for dominance, also a tablet might be a really cool thing for you to use because you do have artistic talent. XD hope I did not offend anyone.


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koitkoit

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 27, 2007

A terrific submission

Great use of photography and animation (I do that myself and so appreciate the effort) - some advice on that would be to cut out the photos in a better way in order to reduce the white outlines you can see. Try photoshop and save the files as PNG-24.

The story was good and was animated well. I particularly like to draw attention to the animation of walking, which so many people fail at, yours looked very good.

Overall, very good mate - with time and more effort, your animations should improve to such an extent where you become amazing. You're already good, just I see great potential in your style.

Keep well fella

Koit



Seishi-KajiSeishi-Kaji

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 26, 2007

It was alright.

The artwork was alright. I did like the use of the photographs. That was creative on your part. Overall it was a nice presentation. But, the animation seemed static at times. The mix of photo and animation was done well. Continue to work, because I see real talent and potential here, and would love to see what else comes from your labor.



ViRuZXViRuZX

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 25, 2007

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Great story! Good choice of music too, and the ending was nice. The graphics weren't so bad, interesting choice of hand drawn/internet-found art. Might wanna find higher resolution images, it looks quite ugly in some up close scenes. Other than that, solid flash.


grabbelfant responds:

thanks for reviewing, most of the "internet-found" art, like the ship and stuff, isn't internet-found but made by me. sorry for the low resolution of some images.