Score: 10

"Great storyline, great graphics, great job!"

by: David

date: March 3, 2007

This was for school??? It's amazing! Although I would prefer that backgrounds and objects be drawn by hand, you made this look great. I liked the choice of music, and you put the Disney "Lion King" song to good use at the end. Congrats. I voted you number one for the month.(It was the only one that I watched before voting on)

Score: 7

"well..."

by: inokopig

date: February 27, 2007

It was a good story, and a great concept. You obviously have talent but I would not suggest using photos like this. Some other suggestions I have are use different colors, at times I found that the colors ran together and or fought for dominance, also a tablet might be a really cool thing for you to use because you do have artistic talent. XD hope I did not offend anyone.

Score: 9

"A terrific submission"

by: koit

date: February 27, 2007

Great use of photography and animation (I do that myself and so appreciate the effort) - some advice on that would be to cut out the photos in a better way in order to reduce the white outlines you can see. Try photoshop and save the files as PNG-24.

The story was good and was animated well. I particularly like to draw attention to the animation of walking, which so many people fail at, yours looked very good.

Overall, very good mate - with time and more effort, your animations should improve to such an extent where you become amazing. You're already good, just I see great potential in your style.

Keep well fella

Koit

Score: 7

"It was alright."

by: Seishi-Kaji

date: February 26, 2007

The artwork was alright. I did like the use of the photographs. That was creative on your part. Overall it was a nice presentation. But, the animation seemed static at times. The mix of photo and animation was done well. Continue to work, because I see real talent and potential here, and would love to see what else comes from your labor.

Score: 9

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by: ViRuZX

date: February 25, 2007

Great story! Good choice of music too, and the ending was nice. The graphics weren't so bad, interesting choice of hand drawn/internet-found art. Might wanna find higher resolution images, it looks quite ugly in some up close scenes. Other than that, solid flash.