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Lines: Evolution

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This is my second submission to Newgrounds, but it's really my first serious cartoon. Made frame by frame, each different picture was completely redrawn.
It's a short movie about human evolution.
Your comments are really important to me, because I will know what do I have to train in.
Thank you.
Hope you like it.

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I liked this!

Pretty good! But the text at the end was too fast, some people may not get it!

I loved it.

It was short, but awesome, and I loved the sound effects alot! Keep up the good work!!!!

GRRRR

HAVE ANY OF YOU IDIOTS EVER BEEN IN AN ANIMALS MIND!... grr great job

IronX responds:

Thanks to everyones comment, even if you didn't like it, your reviews will help me.

Um

WAAAAAY too short. And it looked like the human evolved from a dinosaur or some freakish animal. Than hair poofed up. You have an interesting concept, and if you actually finish this it'd be better. Also, looks aren't the only thing seperating us from animals. The reason we're above the rest of the animal population is because we're intelligent. You don't see monkeys making nuclear weapons.

Overall, if you made the flash like at least 1:30 long, it'd be much better.

I gave this entry a 1

and yet somehow, I was it's "savior". LOL! You can thank me later...

The reason why I gave this a "one" was it was way too simplistic in both concept and execution. The "moral" was trite and the animation was waaaaaay too short. I like this sort of line art; I'd try putting it to some kicky music and go for the "artsy-fartsy" instead of depth.

Credits & Info

Views
2,095
Votes
9
Score
2.89 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 27, 2007
9:44 PM EST