This is my first >.> submission. There was another, but we won't talk about that. Please comment, and be gentle, yet critical. I know the animation isn't the best, but what can ya do?
This is the first installment for the new ad campaign from Docksville Potatoes. It's hard to compete in the dog-eat-dog world of vegetable sales, especially when corn is just givin it away. Now the potatoes fight back!
If this is received even relatively well, the ad campaign will continue...
K
^^Good Points^^
Not really that bad. It was kind of random, but it was still pretty funny, as it was about potatoes being the next corn...whatever that means. I got a bit of entertainment out of it in any case.
^^Needs Improving^^
The lip syncing in the beginning is really off and drags on longer than the actual sound clip. Animations weren't amazing either. Also, needs a replay button. I don't like it when a movie just starts and loops.
Thanks for the review. Yeah, it's basically the start of a smear campaign against corn. it's supposed to be strange and off beat. i was gonna do more. but this one wasn't that good. made i will do more in the future.
okay
it was an alright animation. it had a decent idea to it and your efforts were alright, but this one was very very short and the graphics could've used a touch-up. it was okay to watch, but those 2 points i think could've helped this one out.
Thanks for the review. =D
Summary.
First and foremost it needs a preloader, play button and replay button.
The graphics weren't all that great, the animation wasn't very smooth and the sound quality wasn't exactly good. Improve those and you'll have yourself something.
It was a funny concept but the humor didn't really show through due to the above mentioned issues, I couldn't really enjoy it too much. Good luck on your next animation though :)
I tried putting a preloader in, it obviously didn't work. Like I mentioned in a previous response, I'm a very amateurish amateur. Thanks for the comment, still woulda wished for a better overall score, but thanks for taking the time to comment anyway. =D
I shall improve with each new animation.
Potato?
All I can say is "you're fired!"
Corn is the greatest thing since soup.
yours,
The International Corn Foundation (pop 1)
~fox~
Well at least potatoes digest properly...
"Potatoes...Hey, they turn into poo."
Humor Good. Everything else bad.
You have a good sense of humor. However, the sound quality, animation quality, and quality of presentation of this flash are severely lacking.
At least you recognized the humor. For that I thank you. Still kinda wish you'd have given me a better overall rating, but thanks anyway. =D
