Score: 6
"Lol."
date: January 15, 2007
JNels, you need to take the pole out of your ass and stop being so abusive.
You abused him for his unedited version with the pregnant woman, so he kindly resubmits, out of his own good will, a new copy without that scene in it.
I think your just being mean for the sake of it.
But anyway, its not that bad a game, to improve, you could do a few things.
1. Make more scenes with puzzles, dont listen to the people that say the first scene was too hard, lol, it was quite easy.
2. The drawings were good, but to give them that extra edge, you need to add shading, and need to improve on your animation skills. (Running, walking etc.)
It was good for a few minutes of time, but it could be improved.
Good luck for the future.
Author's Response:
thnx. please check out my other material too. just look me up