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Here's the first short in the Edible Castle series. I hope you all enjoy it.
Written & voiced by Andy Dennis.
Animated by Will Arbuckle.
It's not a a bad idea and the animation was smooth. It was a little short though. The work on the voices was done well, but I'm mainly concerned with the sound effects. The walking, fighting, and getting stuck in a wall being done by someone on a mic really take away from the movie itself. I like the humor and I think this is a good movie. It's just the sound. Keep up the good work.
hmmm well yes i can see exactly where you're coming from there. but most people have been commenting on how much they liked the sound fx. I tend to agree with them - i know, i would, but i'm my own worst critic. i think its bcoz the rest of the cartoon is well done and so the sound effects can be construed as 'delightful' rather than amateur. if i wanted real sound effects i would have made or acquired them.
funny but needs work
was not bad...
I guss i liked it it was funny how you did the sounds and i think you shold make another.
could be a little ongr but i like it, keep up the god stuff
verry funny but short cheese hahahhaha
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