Score: 10

"good moral"

by: maty1234565

date: March 2, 2008

a good moral to all kids teen's and even adults don't smoke i am only 12 and i'm telling adults what to do? weird anyway good animation nice and smooth characters and good relaxing music good work

Score: 10

"I'm so glad you finally submitted!"

by: Temariix

date: January 5, 2007

I'm so happy it finally got submitted and admitted through! This better server that cheeky bastard some revenge for stealing your movie... freakin' jerk. I know how upset you were after that
Anyways, great job ;) I enjoyed every bit, including the extra 20 or so seconds, it was cool

Congratz on the movie, and keep workin!

Score: 3

"smoke"

by: gustre

date: January 3, 2007

i didnt quite get the point of this movie and i almost didnt watch it till the end. it was just boring. what was it? a tragic story or just a telling off? graphics where ok but.... i dont think that throwing a cigarette to the floor will set the entire bank on fire plus its not allowed to smoke in such buildings... or the thing with the smoke in the mayors house... what ever... there surely are ppl who fall doze off on their couches while smoking but i think its their problem... whatever.. somehow i forgot my thoughts :S...

ps: im against smokers too, but that cartoon was just too flat

Score: 5

"K"

by: milinko959

date: January 3, 2007

^^Good Points^^
The movie displays a good moral, that smoking is bad, which I agree on. Anyway, I like how you had a lot going on in this movie aside from the main character, which was neat. Seems like a regular day when you do that. The animations were pretty cool, definitely the best part of this graphically.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was the short loop you had. It played the whole time which was annoying, and even worse, it was pretty low quality. Also, the storyline just seems to drag on too long. You need to get to the point much quicker. I'll admit I didn't watch the whole thing because I was pretty bored.

Score: 6

"uhm right"

by: WoutoR

date: January 3, 2007

to be honest, the animations were quite nice, even as the sound but the content is just to surreal. none of the things that are bad in this movie actually happen. Especially not when you smoke 1 cigarette.