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Dec 27, 2006 | 4:45 PM EST

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*FLASH PLAYER 8 REQUIRED!!!!*
Please watch the entire thing before voting. This is the first episode of a series I will be making. This cartoon, like my last, was hand-drawn, animated frame-by-frame. It is not colored this time, as that takes way too long. This episode is short, but I hope to make longer episodes in the future. Episode 2 has already been storyboarded, and should be out sometime in April, maybe, as these animations take a looong time to do. In the next episode, you will be introduced to Ordinary Man's arch enemy, but for now, enjoy the unextra-ordinary adventures of Ordinary Man! Special thanks once again to MackProductions for flash conversion/icon and OctoEntandre for the awesome theme.

Reviews


X091X091

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 27, 2006

Good job mate. Hope to see you donwunder.

I know this kid and his stuff is da bomb. His ideas are out of this friking world. If he doesnt become the next jorge lucas or stephen spilberg (cant spell his name correctly) then i dont know who will.


NoComicsComics responds:

Thanks man, nice to hear from you. Glad you liked it.


PenguinLinkPenguinLink

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 27, 2006

Very Original!

This was great! You did a very good job on this. The graphics were great, and were very smoothly animated. You said in your comments that you were going to color them later, but I think the graphics look great as they are. Without color, they look oldish and it adds to your style. In my opinion, you should leave them as they are because to me, they look much better this way. The voice overs were great as well. They sounded professional and suited the characters nicely as well. I also found it to be pretty amusing. Nice job with the original characters and amusing storyline. I believe this will be a great series, and keep up the awesome work.

Summary Points: Good graphics and wonderfully animated, Awesome style, Great storyline and plot, Magnificent voices and highly amusing.


NoComicsComics responds:

Thanks for such a great review. It seems so far from what I have seen that I am getting a positive response to the black and white, so maybe I will leave it that way. Once again, thank you very much, I appreciate your review.


MechinoidMechinoid

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 28, 2006

very good

the animation flowed great, and the drawings on the guy's hand was great also. The movie was hahaa funny, but the end joke left me with a hahh/hehh so that brought the movie down a little. Still good and 3/5's, and i'll be awaiting the next cartoon or ordinary man. An Alternate Ending? "Oh no! Woe is me there's no mustard."


NoComicsComics responds:

Thank you for your review. The thing about the end joke was that, it wasn't much of a joke really, I know it looks like it was intended to be funny, but really, it was just a way to end it. Also, at the time, I was thinking that the cartoon would be longer, so by the end his burger would have been cold, so I figured I should make that clear. I totally agree, it's not that funny, I just did it the way I did it, because, well, it had to be silly to match the overall feel of the cartoon. Glad you liked it, and as long as the animation itself is appreciated, I'm happy.


UrsirussUrsiruss

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 27, 2006

Not So Ordinary

It looks as if it were hand-drawn on a piece of paper. A few laughs were in there along with some great animation but the voices become somewhat bland or annoying try giving different characters distinct voices. I promise it'll make a big difference


NoComicsComics responds:

Yeah, all the voices were by me. It was also all done by hand on paper. Thanks for the review.


SarahSubZeroSarahSubZero

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 27, 2006

That was so silly it was good!

I like it, and it was funny! You should make more episodes, and I thought it was pretty creative. I just don't like the voices how they make that *poof* sound like you're using a microphone or something. Oh well, it was good! You also draw pretty well!


NoComicsComics responds:

Thanks, I'm glad to see you liked it. There will be more episodes, in fact, episode 2 is already storyboarded and I will be starting on that one very soon. Also, the sound should be better next time. I'm glad you liked my drawing. Thanks again.