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COAN Concept

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The first Concept episode in the COAN series, the plot is to steal a diamond, but will it be executed correctly, or who will be executed. COAN will be made into a full series shortly episode 1 will be coming soon

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Sorry I can't protect this...

...yet.

You call it an episode, but really its like an alpha, which, in my opinion, is where it belongs.

+The art is OK, although you could improve it with more use of shading
+the voices were Ok, although 'that diamond' and 'the' art gallery are hardly relistic detail.
+the animation was limited, but OK as far as it went.
+you call it The plot, it there wasn't much really- its not that the movie is that bad, it isn't, but you create such expectations with notes like that.
I would seriously make the first episode about introducing the characters more- who or what is COAD?
If you show us a bit more before hand to show who is who, maybe showing what the diamond is- eg an advert in the paper saying "the great StrawberryCLock diamond is on show in the Legendary Frog museum this week" or something, then put in a bit more action or chase after he gets the diamond I think I would more than pass it and look forward to seeing more of your work.
Good start, but not there yet.
Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

ok

well it was ok ish but i personal didnt like it i found it boring and pointless.
I think you need some good music going while all the action is on make it longer and just practise ye animating because that was bad lol. Also work on ye graphics before submitting another 1.

overall I give it a 2 because i dont like it.

waiting to see what happens next

pretty cool but it seemed too short to me? but its still good

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