Two kids, Josh and Everett fight to have rett make a facewhich for him. Josh wants one after terrorizing something while playing a wii.
Needs work.
The premise (two characters arguing over which will make a "facewhich [sic]") is weak. The animation is slow. The voice acting, while minimalist, is bad (though some of this is attributable to the microphone). The...odd cut to the Mortal Kombat scenario could've been played for laughs (perhaps an extension and a parody of Scorpion's Bloody Spear move using the Wiimote). No interactivity (save for a play/replay button). You can do better. Keep trying.
boring in every way
that pretty much sucked in everyway i could possibly think off
it was.....ummmmmmm...it was....
it was good, but the voices werent really good, since it sounded like someone was breathing on the microphoine, rather than speaking. also, make a better scenario, and make it longer.thanks.
yea, I have a pretty crappy microphone. I guess I should hold it a little further away from my mouth. Well, I'll use your tips to improve the next one.
Needs work
+ Well animated sitting down
+OK voices
+OK art
-I don't understand it at all. If you want us all to vote well you need to explain things a bit to the millions of us that don't have a Wii and who don't know what a facewich is.
-speed up the sitting down bit.
-make the one guy look more different to the other.
-put in credits eg sound source, voice
I'll pass it but please sort it out.
thanks, yea one of my friends is random and he loves to say facewhich, so I decided to put it in. I'll try and improve it on the next one or maybe make this one better and update it in edit mode.
this goes good.
well...the graphics were simple, you could add some background music for a better action,and mouths speaking(or something that sign who is speaking), about the wii stuff...i found it original.