Score: 8

"Nice try"

by: DrexDawg

date: November 21, 2007

Nice try dude, at least you accutally made a game ( i havent). Ya i read your comments and you say something about a cam?If u could it would be much better.

Score: 7

"100% great"

by: Xchris

date: December 2, 2006

it is a good game I prefer this to play than other game with no sense at all

Score: 7

"good start my friend"

by: dragonjet

date: November 26, 2006

listen here people!
it's his first time to make a flash game,
took him only 8 hours to finish it,
he's using a free flash designer softeware,
he is a filipino, and take note:
hes only 13 years old
and he completed a non-noobish game!

oh hell his graphics are way better than my games'
pretty good game for a first flash. nice start.
better than other first timers out there.

dont get discouraged by the dark forces out there
its also one thing i like from you,
you're still determined even if others give you zeros
everybody went through this ya know...

oh and you CAN have flash 9, ill pm you...

Score: 4

"anticipating the second round..."

by: VagrantChick

date: November 22, 2006

To make text more readable you need to contrast colors. Because your pictures had a lot of blue in them (dark) orange would be a good contrasting color to use. [purple/yellow, blue/orange, red/green; in art class they call these complementary colors] You might want to try editing/enhancing pictures before you add text (example: slightly blur the area where you are going to add text.) the sound loop that you chose is not "rip-my-brain-out" annoying [BONUS!]. Since you already explained that this was a rough product, you don't have to put those details in the game, but your additions like the "dream" show that you have creativity and potential. i'll be watching for your submissions in the future.

Score: 3

"Needs much improovement."

by: zarboff2121

date: November 22, 2006

Good concept. Needs better presentation. Grammer problems. Too much wining about how your only 13, and you worked 8 hours. Good idea to use real pictures. I found a bug too, when I found the laundry there was no way to go back or leave that screen. Your drawings were terrible I mean im 14, And mine are a million times better. You must have no experience. There are art tutorials on this site also Action script ones so check them out. Good Luck, Nubby.