hey a second

the music u was playing was kickapoo by tenacious d

Heh

Funny, but way to short. The music was good, even though it was just a piece, I don't think I did fully understand it, just like ya say, but it was pretty funny the part that I got. Some personalities would be nice, otherwise it's a good story, keep going!

-cd-

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music, though I wanted to listen to the whole thing. The storyline wasn't bad, kind of humorous. The graphics were also pretty well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I was expecting this to either be sad or funny, and you took the funny route, which didn't turn out so well. You should have added more to get the characters some more personality. This is just boring the way you have it now.

heh

you're right, I dont get it

Ok

Cute joke, but's that's it. Could've been executed in a better, longer, and even funnier mannner. Great idea! Just could have used MORE thought, effort and desire.