Score: 6
"Not bad, needs a little cleaning up"
date: November 15, 2009
One suggestion I have is to make the clickable area around an item a big larger. It was a little irritating to try to pick up small items and keep missing.
Also, the dialogue almost always went off the screen and I couldn't see it, and it stayed up for a while after the person finished talking, which was a bit unnecessary. There were some typos, too. I don't think those would be too hard to fix?
I also encountered a strange glitch. In the cell (before being able to leave), I walked into the far left wall. The game and mybrowser froze, and then it said there was an unresponsive glitch. I aborted, and it flashed every cutscene and scene abruptly. I refreshed the page and only a quarter of the flash would load. After refreshing a second time, everything was fine. I don't know if that problem was on my end or not.
Anyway, the game itself was fine, a bit short, though.
