more :D
very nice. im suprised this has a low score. everythings nice but its a bit choppy try speeding up the frame rate and adjusting objects moving so it doesnt speed up with the frame rate... i think.
Author Comments
Soul Zero is a show that i was gonna make with my freind whiplash2089. Although you can tell, its based off of a dragonball z fighting stlye but does not have anything to do with DBZ at all. Although I didnt get to finnish it i was able to animate 24 seconds of it so i hope you enjoy. sorry its so short. OH yea, you can also see some of my work on www.piletx.deviantart.com and www.no-life-club.com . And thanxs for wacthing.
Graphics are OK but the animation lacks
The animation looks like hell, doesn't flow at all. The linework on the characters make it look like hell. Maybe if you used lines and taperd them with a fill adjustment/offset the cleaner shapes will add more effect.
PiletX responds:
Oh sorry, I might have forgot to say that this was the first animation that I ever did in flah. When I animated that I was just learning the tools and how it works. But I made that a year ago and I posted it cause it probly might not get finnished. But if I recently made that I probably would have taken your advice do to the fact, that i know that, that animation was horrible compared to the stuff I do now. Thanks for the review.
I'll be damned..
Wow, nice. Very crips and well drawn artwork, animation flows smoothly, honestly, it's some of the better work I've seen here on NG. Kudos, and if you don't make the series, I will pluck your eyes and feed them to my psuedo-dragon...
PiletX responds:
EEEEmmmm, i might make it into a series but im also working on a new project called X-Surge. Im still in the story making part with my freind the caj so it wont come out for a while. Also what you watched there was the first thing ive done in flash so I hope this new project will be ALOT better.
nice
noot bad
Dude work harder on it
This got potential, The intro was amazing and that actually harms the rest of your movie since the characters are not that well drawn, but still you can improve it, I don't think this will pass the judgement because #1 it is way to short and has no plot ... but you should work harder on this and you´ll get better reviews for sure
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2.77 / 5.00
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- Nov 16, 2006
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