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I have learned a lot of new things since I made this flash and my next flash should make this one look terrible so anyone has more tips I would like them Enjoy!
well, it looks like an ok try... just next time move around more and use facial expressions. try to improve the 'art' a bit while you're at it.
P.S Love that song!! ^_^
I didn't watch the hole thing cause i didn't bare. Which drug were you on when you did this piece of shit?
What drugs where u on when u wrote ur review? O and thanks the helpful thoughts on how to make it better its people like you that make NGs so wonderful!!
Hope i liked? HOPE I LIKED IT? I loved it!
Make more of those!
The humor was gr8!
The music as gr8!
The graphics, well, hand drawn isn't to standard nowadays.
Overall this music video is excellent, probably better than those hotshots they call them selves "professionals!
Your the man!!
Not bad my guy, I like the wierd al song. and you did a pretty good job of using animation that went with the song. you are doing a pretty good job , if it is possible you should invest in a scetch pad so your art that you draw will come out better, and there are a lot of tutorals here on newgrounds to help you get better on tweening and fram to fram animation, this was alittle choppy and not so smothe. but as I said we can tell you put effort into this so I hope it passes judgment, and will look forward to seeing you improve. also I saw what the other guy wrote don't pay any attencion to him he obviously does not know anything about flash and is probbaly jelous that you at least know the basic concept of the program, keep trying, andstrive to be unique my friend.
Well thank you very much for your kind words.
First up well done for 'animating' the whole song- far too many music video style flashes don't do that and it really ruins the effect. Plus it is a long (and great) song, so good effort there.
As for the flash itself, obviously the sound is fantastic, and that really helps for the comedy value as well. The big problem is the animation, or rather the lack of it. Each character is fairly well drawn- far from great, but passable. Keep practising the animation skills though, as without them it is only a little better than a slide show of pictures. As you say you've improved a lot since doing this I trust that won't be a problem in the future!
So enough to pass, but only just. I hope that your future projects show the marked improvement you claim, and keep picking such good backing music!
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