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Frax's World Ep. 5

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A new episode !
The longest i made, 77 Seconds long.

Leave a review plz and Have fun.

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just finish

---- New style is horrible by comparison. Actually still slightly above par, which means I must congratulate your original style again.
Unneeded thin lines. Details look kinda cluttered now.

--- Animation not your strong point. When he's spinning, don't just tween him rotating! Try and make it look like he's going on his hands! Maybe ease the motion!

-- No replay button.

++ When ad came up, I chuckle a tiny bit.

+++ Great voices.

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Hate the style, but the silly ending kinda made up. I was expecting it to just finish there, so was kinda taken aback!

*sigh*

Ok here's the deal, your old charectors were..ahem..people freindly..at least nerologicly. The way you have changed shape on your charecters, was a bad move. (I hate being negitive on this review but hey, I see potentail and untill I see it relized, the negitive must be shown.)

Go back to your old charecter design, try to keep it round becuase people sympithize better with rounded charecters rather then chareters with un-needed edges.

Great that you gave your charecters names and descritions. Work on your humor, bring back your charecter design and of course a longer more sensible plot would be nice (oh and stay away from words that are written in what looks like the pain brush, you'll never make front page that way).

That's all the helpful advice i can think of at the momment. At least untill Ep.6 comes out.

Frax responds:

Well thnx, i'l delete bob then :)
Ep 6 is comming on sunday.

Lol a box-car?........

Rad man......box-car?

Lol........
Anway i don't follow the series,but i can tell u do a great job....

~Edge~

wow.

This really good, I haven't seen your other ones but I will. Good Job.

Frax responds:

Thnx for the review :)
Be sure to check the rest of my episodes :)

Frax

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Oct 18, 2006
8:19 AM EDT