the first one was better
this one was quite good but the first one was far better, first one was really funny but the second was tired just didn't seem as good :/
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What!? Episode two!?
TheSentinel responds:
Thank you for the review! I'll see about making the next episode more like the first.
Sweet
as a second generation trekkie i must say that your flash is amazing. the guy who wrote before me was right the graphics do add to the hilarity so dont change them. i can wait to see the next episode. keep up the good work :)
TheSentinel responds:
Thanks for the review! I don't know when the next episode will be created, but I'll try to get it in soon. Keep watching!
I dunno what the guy before me is talking about
The graphics add to the hilarity, their artfully terrible! anyway THATS FREIKING HILARIOUS!!! I love how the comet come and just blows shit up. I think thisll be the next great series on NG! but once again, can you lower the volume on the door opening sound?
TheSentinel responds:
Thank you very much. I'll see to it that the door sound is lowered.
Oh, my gosh.
Damn, I hope you decide to improve your graphics, because both episodes 1 and 2 were really funny. The graphics, however, almost ruined this for me. If you did some lip-syncing or a bit more fluid animation, this would be golden, because your plot lines and the continuity between episodes 1 and 2 were really great.
The Speakonia voices added to the humour, but I do think a little background music would have helped. The intro music, however, was too loud and overpowered the talking at the beginning.
Lots of room for improvement, but this is some funny stuff, so I hope you build on it some more.
TheSentinel responds:
Thanks for the tips! I'll try them out, and see how they go. Oh, and trust me, if I could improve on the graphics, I would :) I agree that I should put some more animation into it, though. We'll see what happens.