WHMIS training FTL
nice style, more voices would have been cool
Author Comments
I'd like to start by stating that this is an educational video made for a Comtek Class at holy trinity high school. Billy is modelled after Megaman clearly. I'd also like to state, I am not Nick Lutz. He's a good friend of mine and has absolutely no time to create an account and submit this, so he asked me to for him. He neglected to send the .fla file so I could not add a Preloader or a Replay button. Anyways, let me reiderate this is educational. It is not meant to be hilarious, violent or any other things you expect to see. I know the voice isn't all that great and it could use background music, but if all goes well i'll attempt to get the .Fla and fix that alright? Well enjoy!
Speed up.
I think the pacing needs to be worked on. The premise is acceptable, but the delivery needs work. I think the tongue in cheek jokes would be laugh out loud if you could get rid of the misplaced pauses (not the awkward ones). Just polish it up and you'll be golden!
Dude, I think I just learned something...
That was a half decent start at making a flash movie. The plot was awful. And your voice acting needs a lot of work, but the premise was okay. You should have added music (something campy from the era of public service annoucements). I know you did this for school but remeber there are more drawing tools in Flash than just line. Try to put a little more effort into your artwork. Also, your movie felt like you were making it up as you drew it. Try to work on a script before making the movie. It will give you better flow and gives you the ability to add humour (which was barely clinging to life in this movie).
nahh
this is like profesor bor-ing... man that was a really slow movie...
but... well i dont know its not my tipe of flash.. or really that wasnt what i expect while i was dowloading the movie i mean... for a 56 kb user thats a nightmare to downlad something bad and heavy... but tell to your friend or for u i dont know... that is a good work but not that maybe i expected.. but is good.. c ya..
DragonHybrid responds:
I'll be sure to pass on those words of praise.
Welcome to NG
Home of all things non-educational and this is clearly educational.... and kina slow.
DragonHybrid responds:
I feel it kind of stupid to have to point out the many flash tutorials by Tom and Wade... And if you didn't want to see something educational, next time, read the comments.