(( decent but could be better ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad, the graphics seemed ok the animationw as abit slow but i think thats how you wanted it, the issues i thought it had was that it was abit short, and didnt have propper play or replay buttons.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more content, making it longer, and some replay buttons at the end.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation but could use more effort.

~X~

Good

I liked the sketchy art work its pretty different to what ive been seing recently. Good job on the writing as well and the music was mellow. This was all in all a good flash . Pretty nice animation and graphics, good style, good sound..Overall its all good.

Very Nice

Artistic A good all around expiremental film

Good effort

There's nice style in this movie....
However, there are parts where the movie feels inadequate.

Such as the intro, being too long, it delays too much.

Then the alchemy part where the guys hand does the same thing 3 times in a row. that made the whole movie suck more than it should have.

I would suggest working on scene transitions and character animation.

overall it's a great movie and the end part with all the transforming shapes and people was great.

Good job.

Great flash...

the whole movie is good, but could you make the sequel just a bit funnier?