Good job for your first time...
however i remember you writing a review for a sprite colab saying that even having just started doing flash you could do a better job... Well i'm just informing you that this is not the case at all.
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I've recently realized that the name Super Flash Brothers is already taken, so i apologize. I am changing the names.
Meh
That was okay
could be improved...
theres a lot of improvement that could be done on - i aint gonna complain but im just gonna sum it up by saying that your hand drawn parts are not up to scratch, now its fair enough if your new to flash or whatever but if you want to progress they will need improvement
also The Super Flash Brothers name/ logo/ whatever thing is already taken, they created the decline of gaming series (look em up ther great) so you mite wana think bout changin that
MrGruntsworthy responds:
okay, as you may have noticed, I changed the name. And yes, this was my first project in flash that i put effort into. Right now i'm testing my mettle in hand-drawn flash stuff--and i must say, the pictures look amazing. But i've yet to actually ANIMATE them. stay tuned!
Ok, I guess
What really saved this movie was probably the music. Before you work on the next part, practice. But the first song was awesome.
MrGruntsworthy responds:
i think the audio was what made this movie so large in filesize, even after i optimized the audio. Right now i'm practicing working with drawings in flash, and i have to say mine look kind of cool (for a first try, anyway).
Just keep an eye out for my next submission!
It's pretty good...
But i think you could improve. Try using a DBZ powering up sprite shhet instead of the circle and lines. Also, there are some custom sprite tutorials here on NG that you might want to try. All in all though, a nice first try.
MrGruntsworthy responds:
where can i get these 'power up' sprites? ive been looking for some but i was forced to use the ball (lolz)