Hmm wow the voicing..
If it wasn't for the great voicingof the ride, i wouldn't have passed this, it's not bad for your first flash, actulley it's really good XD but it's kinda bland and boring, and i was confused wtf was going on for a bit...
Author Comments
This is my first submission. To be frank, it stinks. Please don't be too hard on it, though.
----- Thanks for all the feedback! I was afraid it would be blammed off of newgrounds. I probably will work on a new version, keeping your comments in mind.
Obvios
This is obviosly the ride at disney world. That ride goes on for hours. You got that movie dead on.
At least...
hah, at least you realise it stinks, which shows you know you could animate better.
To be honest though, it's really good. Especially good for your first submission. The sounds were good - albiet a little quiet at times, and couldnt hear what they were saying.
The graphics were quiet well. Animation was decent, you could do to work on the details a little more. And it was quite funny.
You did well :)
I wouldn't mind more!
has potential
The sound is excellent, I'll give you that. I think if you spend some more time, to design your backgrounds, then work on the characters, you'll do great. Maybe resubmit in a month or two when you have made the graphics improved.
I loved it!
This was the first origanal, good, funny submission i've seen in 2 days! It was really really good for a first submission. Yeah, i hate those Head-on commercials too. to make them worse, they repeat it 3 times!!!