ok wow
this surprised me, this was very original and it seemed well thought out, 5/5 10/10
Author Comments
Note: I suggest you watch the previous sequences if you haven't, to follow the story.
In the 3rd sequence, Lorraine learns about Tseng's past.
*Additional credit:
Jovglov as Mail-order Bride
All art and music are original
Have fun you! ;-}
Yep
Still going. Very creative. I agree with mr. numbers down there.
memorable
ignore all suggestions given to you is my suggestion, just keep going
could of been better.
Really I didn't like the start at all. all the way up to the part with the "Bird Doctors" as I call them :)
Well done on adding subtitles, something to think about for next time.
Maybe put some sort of dark background behind the subtitles so they are more clear to read. Parts of the movie, mainly when the doctor was talking, I couldn't see the middle text.
sorry for the harsh review. I look forward to the next movie.
d-z responds:
Thanks for pointing those out, dude.
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