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Jimmy Fish: The Intro

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Hahaha this flash took me like 5 minutes to make I cant beleive it passed jugement

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Absolutely horrible..

I've seen little kids make better flashes.. This kind of thing is not for you.. just quit while no one really spams you.. I give this animation 2 thumbs down.. for 1 some of the subtitles were WRONG the bullet that entered the guys head left no entry wound.. pay attention to detail.. also please don't try stickmen.. at least do some lame blob.. like "legendary_frog" uses...

DeckMaster171 responds:

I havnt seen u make ANY flash you dont know what your talking about noob

Yup i blammed

You lucky it passed the judgement.

You have potential but there is no real effort in this flash, maybe were you too excited to submit it?

DeckMaster171 responds:

Dont talk to me like im 5 years old no i didnt feel excited when im submited it and its just a shock to me as it is to you that it passed judgement

johnny rocketfingers when made by a 14 year old.

Face it. Thats exactly what this is. You have SOME potential, but you need to use original characters.

Borrowing style is okay, but a blatant rip-off just won't cut it.

Emmm... Ripoff Johnny rocketfingers Much?

Yeah, this was a sub par Ripoff of Johnny rocketfingers. Not very good either. Don't make it a series or j00 will get pwn3d n00b. Just some advice.

DeckMaster171 responds:

Face it your a noob and you dont understand whats going on! I made the comics waaaay before Jonny Rocketfingers even came out

Has potential, but could use some work.

You really need to make some motion in your animation. Your face closeups are good (uhm, for sticks. Heh.) but your characters don't move at all. It would be ok to do frames and panning if you had gorgeous artwork, but when it's just stick figures you can't get away with that, you pretty much have to have good animation.

I definately was getting a Johnny Rocketfingers vibe from this, which is a good thing I think. It does, however, mean it has done before. That doesn't mean you can't do it again, but it does mean you have a certain bar to pass.

Check around for some flash tutorials and practice doing skeletal animation (that's basically what sticks are) and your next film will be much better! Good luck and I hope to see an improved version of this series.

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1.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 3, 2006
4:37 PM EDT