what
this makes no sense
Author Comments
I flash short I've been working on. You know the usual, aliens, disections, shrinkings...insurance. Just watch.
Edit: Fixed the voice and walking issues.
Technically not brilliant, however...
The illustration and animation on both this and your latest contribution leave a lot to be desired. Not withstanding that the dialog between the characters defiantly has something, otherwise I wouldn't have bothered tracked down this movie.
It's just something about that, random yet naturalistic style of conversation that dose it for me.
U should check out David Firth work if your not already aware of his stuff.
Halrious
Lol an awsome toon!
It had good jokes
theres just a few things you need to work on;
the biggie is the voice needs to be a bit different, with the exception of the shruken guy all the voices sounded too much alike
the guy's feet and walking, this isn't a big deal, you did well with it, its just something that annoys me.
and the other biggie is in the scene with the two aleins you need a little more head movement or something to indicate whos talking, since neither of them have mouths it can be hard to follow who is saying what. (this can also be remedy by changing the voices.)
Gnomelord0 responds:
Ya, the walking thing was something I wasn't satisfied with as well. And don't worry, I've altered the aliens voice!
needs better sound...
other than the sound it was good