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08/22/2006 | 01:24PM EST
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3.26 / 5.00
Score Rank: #41,380 Popularity Rank: #92,571
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Hey, I'm Michelle - I joined Newgrounds a while ago, but I never got the chance to be very active...or post anything.
Anyway, this is my first attempt at animation. I took a short course in flash at Art Center--the whole short took about 3 days to make, 13 hours. The storyline is pretty lame, I have to admit...any suggestions for improvement would be helpful.
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Average Score: 7.6 / 10
"artist in the making"
this was cool. i've tried it at school, it takes me 5 hours(?) to make a crappy, 5 fps game. this was neat. no cheap tweening or crappy rawing. well done. there is monly one downside to this-could have used some sound.
"cute and sweet animation"
This was a very sweet and cute animation. I liked the idea of it. Don’t be selfish. First the bunny pushes the other bunny away but he sees he can’t pull out the carrot by himself so they work together and as a team they manage to get the carrot and share it. It was nice to watch because everything was frame by frame and no cheap tweeing so thumbs up for that. It felt like watching an animation but not like watching a movie because music and sounds were missing. It would be great if you could add music and sounds to this animation to make it a movie. Since you are good at animating I think you should keep on and submit more stuff to Newgrounds, please.
"I liked it!"
Would've given 10 if it was longer and had sound, but excellent for a first attempt.
"put some music to it..."
...and it will be fantastic. make a sequel or a prequel and give the bunnies a back story. great job!
"Ooow! So cute!!! =D"
So cute movie! Ooooow... How cute! Very good animated too! =) I liked it!