not bad at all, even the voices sound funny to me ^_^
Author Comments
Ok, so this is my second flash video I've ever made. The voices were done by me and edited in a program called Audacity. I have a video I made before this, but it is a stick figure and a blob. It completely sucks so I'm not sure if I'll bother submitting it, but I might.
The reason I made this video was because one day my younger brother was going through some papers and found a little comic of a bubble that I had drew out when I was real young. He asked, "hey, why don't you make this in that one program you use (meaning flash :-P) and put it online." So I decided why not try making it for my favorite flash site. So here it is...I really hope you guys enjoy this. I know it's not the best so I'll try to take criticism as best as I can :) As best anyone can ^.^
Also, I'm not 100% sure if the preloader works, I got the "CODING" from a site so I hope that it does. If it doesn't, let me know in a review and could you please tell me a good tutorial to look up to make one of my own. Most the ones I've checked out haven't been that good and don't explain things well. They just say post this here and it works. I wanna know how it works more in depth.
Thanks and enjoy!!
yer it was ok..
i probably would of given it a 2-3, but i didnt vote.
critism's:
1. It would of been alot more affective if the bubble wasn't just round, bubbles tend to change shape as they move, also, it may of been better if the bubble bounced, te deformed as he hit the ground
2. you should of given an explanation as to my the needle couldnt pop the bubble, maybe the bubble was holding something in the needle's path? or maybe you should of made it a pac man twist, and had the bubble eat a larger dot.
good job, i wanna see more work from you
Syn-Guitarist responds:
Oh thanks. That's really good advice and I really appreciate that. I'll take those into consideration next time I make a video. #1 is something I really overlooked and I'm glad you pointed that out. Thanks for leaving a good review with constructive critisism.
Love the turn of events
That was pretty good for your second flash... I liked the way you thought it would end one way and then it didnt. Anyways good movie overall you should definantly think about making it longer or submitt something else because its quality flash work. Anyways keep up the good work
Syn-Guitarist responds:
Thanks ^.^ I am glad you liked the video. I hope to submit more later on that are much better. Some of these people are amazing.
that was ass
Everything was ass
It looked like it was made on a paint program
It wasnt Funny or violent
Get a better mic the sound was terrible
overall:2.4
Syn-Guitarist responds:
Nah, it really was created in flash. Except the sound...yeah I do need to get a better mike =/ I know it wasn't violent cause I didn't say it was, heh. I will try to make another one better. What can I do to make it better? Any suggestions? Or do you know any good tutorials.
Grats.
You made me chuckle. That's much much more than most of the so called humorous pieces ^^=
Syn-Guitarist responds:
Glad it made you chuckle. Lol, thanks ^.^